Drawing with tablet number 1

I'm attempting a come back... I discovered that my problem was my wrists (but that can be worked with) and my attemot to mimic my budds and sytle types and ended up getting a shitty style that looked nothing like either of the 2's work

so im attempting something else... Egoraptor's simpler style

I need to start from somewhere

ands there no other way to draw my mess of a fucking hair style